Wednesday, August 02, 2006

i tried

i tried nd failed..
life didnt look bright...
i tried,i tried..

i knew d stakes were high..
i just couldnt c d end..
i percieved d thorny patches..
at d end of d tunnel,there was no light
but i tried,i tried..

d way looked promising
d wheather was nice..
it wasnt raining
and d sun wasnt too bright
thats why,i tried,i tried..

i saw a whole new world
a lot of truths and some lies
i saw behind all d facades
from where i stood at d great height
and so i m glad..i tried,i tried..

3 comments:

Anirudh 'Lallan' Choudhry said...

hmmmmmm....!

m still here... said...

good that u tried n tried n tried.. all d best.. peace

r said...

Philosophical side:::
"i tried"
what n excuse ,lacks killer instinct,makes u lazy.
it shud be "i tried ,succeded within timeline" or "do or die."
but atleast better than not tryin at all.
fellings side on a serious note:::
my heartiest sympathy for u.
keep trying even after seeing the whole new world.there are several new worlds in this recently found world .keep exploring.